We are learning to recount events that happened in the past.
We know we can do this when we can:
· Follow the Writing Process
· Have a title
· Write: an orientation telling when, who, what and where the event happened, a sequence of events and a personal comment to conclude the recount
· Use the past tense
· Use a lot of different descriptive words to make our recount more interesting
· Start my sentences in different ways
Noah said, "Last year on the snowy day, Mum and I went out in the backyard. My story is about that. Recounts have four parts - a title, orientation, sequence of events and a personal response. Ms B bought some ice in and we felt it and we wrote some words like The ice is as cold as Antarctica. That's called a simile. We learnt to do onomatopoeia. We learnt to start our story with a question or onomatopoeia to make it hook the reader."
Noah said, "Last year on the snowy day, Mum and I went out in the backyard. My story is about that. Recounts have four parts - a title, orientation, sequence of events and a personal response. Ms B bought some ice in and we felt it and we wrote some words like The ice is as cold as Antarctica. That's called a simile. We learnt to do onomatopoeia. We learnt to start our story with a question or onomatopoeia to make it hook the reader."
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